by Trinity Blacio
Riverdale Avenue Books
Desire
Romance, Erotica
http://www.amazon.com/Her-Stepbrothers-Demands-Trinity-Blacio-ebook/dp/B010RD29CQ
My Review:
First off, I want to let you guys know that I struggled to get through this book. It was a whirlwind….the poor grammar, the quick plot, and the underdeveloped characters, I wanted to just put down the book and walk away. But I didn’t for you guys. I don’t want you guys to have to experience that I did. So I finished it and now will give you my review.
“Her Stepbrothers’ Demands” starts off with Jasmine Alexander running away from an unknown threat (to the reader). It’s quickly explained that she lives with her mother, Katherine, and her step-father, Cole Madox. Apparently, Cole has done something to piss her off. It has something to do with assisting her mother into breaking a pact that they made when she was younger.
Her two stepbrothers are now introduced, Logan and R.D., as they escort her off an airplane. Did I tell you she was on an airplane? Well, she is. Apparently, TSA doesn’t exist in this novel because they were able to make it to the plane without a ticket, grab her, and escort her back home.
From there, the book just speeds by with the amount of plot lines that are being thrown at you.
Her step-family are werewolves (hence her being mad at her mother because she already knew), her daddy is crazy, she’s being stalked by a vampire, she’s the soul mate of her two step-brothers, and on top of all of this, she’s thirty and talks and acts like she’s nineteen.
Instead of taking time to thoroughly develop the characters and have the reader get to know them, within ten minutes of reading, there’s enough people in the game to spin your mind for a loop. Nothing truly gets resolved or explained and at the end of the book you’re just glad the ride is over.
If the concepts and characters were truly developed this could have been an awesome trilogy, instead the reader is left with a short story unworthy of reading.
I wouldn’t recommend this book to anyone and that’s unfortunate.
The cover is hot though. I’ll give the publisher’s that.
Until next time,
‘Nelle
I received this book for free for my unbiased review.
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